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Post by Lady Ten on Aug 7, 2010 18:37:27 GMT -5
Riro, this plot you're using here sounds a lot like the one at Starless, minus the backstory to explain it and in a more generic setting. I don't mean to accuse you of anything, but to be honest I would like to know how intentional the similarities are (this isn't the first time something like this has happened).
And one other thing: I think your plot said that belief in StarClan has vanished, and yet there are still cats who believe in it?
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Post by Riro on Aug 7, 2010 20:21:56 GMT -5
Oh, hi Lady Ten. To answer your first [comment] I really did not steal your plot. This was something I meant to do a while back before I saw your site but was to lazy to. I honestly mean that.
To answer your second [question], most belief is Starclan has faded. There are some cats (kind of like Skywatcher) who still believe, but their belief is only based on legends.
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Post by Lady Ten on Aug 9, 2010 21:24:05 GMT -5
I suggest you add more of an explanation as to why the Clans broke apart -- like what they were fighting over and why it was such a big deal to them.
Also, down in the credits side table, it says "Content to their respectful owners". I think you mean respective.
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Post by Riro on Aug 10, 2010 6:47:56 GMT -5
Oh, thank you for your help, I will add more to the plot and change the side tables.
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