Vanilla//Shecat <NF>

[petella]

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.Vanilla.

A beloved 6 moon shecat.

Part of: which group of cats? or none?
Belief: She believes in starclan, but to an extent. She has heard the tells and is curious about them. The main reason she believes in them is due to her mother telling her about them when she was a kit.

Appearance: She's a pretty creme/gray shecat with unusual blue eyes. Her base coat is white/cream and she has darker creme markings. She is built lean with a long plume-like tail. Her muscles are strong, good for running and pushing off of something. She has a dark pink nose and pawpads. Her muzzle is white. She is semi to longfurred with points at the end of her tall ears.

History: at least 200 words

[Personality Trait 1]
At least one negative
[Personality Trait 2]
At least one negative
[Personality Trait 2]
At least one negative[/size][/color]

[Riro]

Aw, thank you for creating a cat. You still have to finish the bio, but before you are done, I want to point out a few things that could make it better.

It says that she believes in them to some extent. How does she believe in them? Does she thank Starclan every time she catches a meal and prey to them for help? Or does she wonder if the tales are true and search for signs of them? How much did her mother tell her about Starclan? Did her mother believe in Starclan and how much influence did she have on her kit?

Sorry, I forgot to mention, vanilla does not grow on the island, so the cats would not really know about it. You could change it, or if you wanted, she could keep the name because her mother might have told her tales about things that do not exist any more, like many types of vegetation, animals, and other things. Remember, the only man made thing in existence still is the stone wall.

If you are a bit confused about the part of: question, it is simply referring to if she is a part of The Survivng Clan, Terror Unite, or none of those.

I would suggest adding a bit more to the appearance, describing more about her build and her eyes and anything else you wanted to add. You mention dark markings. What do the markings look like and what shape do they resemble? What is the markings name? What color are the points at the end of her tail and ears? Remember, if her eyes are blue, they have to be bought, but blue/gray eyes do not. Longfurred cats are also rare and they have to be bought. The only way she could have long hair like that is if she had a loss of guard hairs, which would make the remaining fur glossy and shiny. That is a mutation and does not have to be bought.

History should include the day she was born up until now.

You can add more than the three given personality traits, but the minimum is three. At least one must be a bad trait, for there can be no mary-sues running around here.

[petella]

Well i was making her off of an image i found of this gorgeous cat i found

[Riro]

Oh, tis pretty!